Thursday, 4 March 2010

Shark Drive - great recount by Xavier Room 2

I couldn't resist putting this great recount by Xavier in Room 2 onto my blog for you to enjoy. Well done Xavier!

Shark Drive
I went hunting for a great white shark.We saw a shark lurking in the dark blue water. It was a dot in the water at first but when it got closer I saw it ferocious teeth in the distance. It's fin was like a knife. The shark was swimming as fast as a rocket. When it saw the food floating on top of the water it took only two massive bites to shallow it.

The food was gone it wanted more. I throw Taylor overboard. Then the shark crunched on the cage like it was it's breakfast.

I saw it teeth that looked like blades...


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